In Response to Ali's Post on "Body Collage"

I read Ali's post about her experience writing her body collage, and I agree that it was a nice change-up from high school to be writing about ourselves rather than a random topic. I felt like it was sort of a self exploration piece to see what we could come up with. It took some creativity to come up with how exactly to present the story, but I feel like the steps we did in class really helped lead into our papers. I also feel a little insecure about my writing, and am a little anxious to see what my peer-editors had to say about what i wrote, especially since we were writing about such personal subjects. However, it will be nice to have feedback from both our peers and teacher. I agree with Ali that the input will definitely be a great way to improve upon my writing.